Thanks-- I just need to leave well enough alone. I can't remember the last time I've tinkered with something so much. It's probably going to be my only story in this fandom-- I've already told you my perceptions of the community specifically, but Hugo's writing is so frigging voluminous and dense that it's really hard to find an inch of territory that hasn't been covered in canon already!--so I really wanted it to be as strong as I could make it.