ext_28122 ([identity profile] kenazfiction.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kenaz 2015-08-26 01:35 am (UTC)

I think it definitely has to be separation-- willing, I think, in this case. Death feels too pat and dramatic-for-drama's-sake in the context of this story, and I think also makes the specific relationship between these two characters more difficult to spin. Ugh, this is giving me fits.

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