Oh Kenaz, this is exquisite - a poetic jewel of heartbreaking devotion and unrequited love. I am breathless. I love Voronwe's voice and your language is so beautifully reminiscent of the Silm and yet uniquely your own.
"but the heart is a disobedient thing, and childlike in its hopes; it beats the tattoo of its own desires though the mind knows them to be fruitless"
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"but the heart is a disobedient thing, and childlike in its hopes; it beats the tattoo of its own desires though the mind knows them to be fruitless"
God, that's good.
A chuil,
~elfscribe