Dramatic question
Aug. 25th, 2015 01:14 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
So.... is it better to kill off the completely inconvenient wife who is only evident in canon because her son wasn't hatched from an egg, or have her Go West, somewhat petulantly? Trying to not to entirely demonizing a non-character, while also not wanting to be overly sympathetic, and leave slashy husband some leeway for technical infidelity without making him a total cad.
Talk amongst yourselves.
File under: #fanficproblems; #loomingdeadlines; #ohshitnotdoneyet
Talk amongst yourselves.
File under: #fanficproblems; #loomingdeadlines; #ohshitnotdoneyet
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Date: 2015-08-25 09:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 09:32 pm (UTC)The scope of the story is fairly limited, and she doesn't actually appear in it. But her obvious absence needs some sort of explanation. Since the characters are pretty angsty to begin with, I think death or departure are more likely than marriage-of-convenience. (In fact, if I took the marriage-of-convenience route, I probably wouldn't even have a story, because everyone would just be frolicking away with their partner behind closed doors while publicly being appropriately married!)
Essentially, I'm seeking justification for infidelity. As a rule, I don't break up canon couples in my fanfic (though I've written people in canonical couples with others *before* the canonical relationship, e.g. Elrond and Gil-galad)... but this one is a grey area because the spouse never actually appears anywhere. But I feel like just having the character wantonly cheating while his wife is dead or in Valinor makes him a jerk-- because ultimately, he's still married unless he gets some sort of special dispensation from the Valar a la Míriel Serindë! I guess that's why I need her to be slightly unsympathetic-- so that her husband doesn't seem like a complete ass for having a moment of weakness with someone else.
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Date: 2015-08-25 09:45 pm (UTC)*g*
I also prefer to leave canon couples as they are, or write a relationship into another time, like before or after the actual or supposed canon relationship. My personal solution might look like the easy way out, which is a same-sex relationship being also morally well possible despite a het marriage or relationship (could be also threesome or poly, but not necessarily so, particularly not when the het partner is not present for whatever reason), provided the first partner is consensual. Since this leans toward my personal preferences, it's not an easy way out for me, although I well understand it might be for other people.
For your couple, I see the desire to make the wife less sympathetic; I would feel the same. I also think this would work in this situation. Like if he was kind of left behind deliberately, and probably needs to fear that their marriage might not just easily be rekindled once they meet again in the West, who would begrudge him some comfort and company until then?
(On a side note, I find the concept rather difficult to wrap my mind around, that an elf whose partner has left for the West, for whatever rightful reason, might be expected to be alone for yéni until they meet again. Sounds as illogical and impossible to live through to me as the whole part about elven sex in That Document.... ;o) )
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Date: 2015-08-25 10:00 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2015-08-26 03:11 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 12:27 am (UTC)Errrrrr...being frank here, I've never favored the slash trope that makes the inconvenient wife into an unsympathetic shrew or mope. Rather, how about a flawed woman — even a relatable one — who has a spectrum of characteristics, good and bad? Same goes for her straying husband. I love flawed characters who still can spark sympathy with the reader. Could your character's moment of weakness be simply because he has human desire — a strong chemistry as it were — for the other dude, so powerful that he justifies his straying to himself or hell, just lets the testosterone take charge?
I do like the idea of a political marriage that isn't exactly a bed of roses, plus your examples of Non-Ideal Elven Behavior™ in reply to jaiden are PERFECT! :^D
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Date: 2015-08-26 01:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 01:56 am (UTC)Be assured that you do not come across as a writer who does this. Ever. I've encountered it from no one I really know during my first forays into Library of Moria back in the day. I'm confident you'll write a fine short story, rusty or not! It's great that you're writing again!
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Date: 2015-08-26 03:41 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 09:46 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 09:58 pm (UTC)I totally don't buy the idea that the Elves were so freakin' pure that they didn't make occasional bad marriages for the sake of politics. Does that mean they're stuck in shitty marriages until the end of time?? I mean, Curufin was ready to "kidnap" (and I am SO reading between THOSE lines!) Luthien for the sake of personal gain... Aradhel's marriage was questionable...Fingolfin straight-up blows off his wife and takes the kids to go romping in M-E, leaving him and three of the kids dead and turning one of them into a noble gas (sorry, lame joke) and his wife back in Valinor going WTF?! The Elves pulled some Dick Moves.
So, yeah, I guess I'm leaning toward political marriage goes badly, and I want to believe they can get an Elvish Divorce once they're all back in Valinor.
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Date: 2015-08-25 10:23 pm (UTC)This is totally awesome. :D
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Date: 2015-08-25 11:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 09:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 10:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-25 10:09 pm (UTC)I agree that both dying and sailing can seem cop outs but not too much, if they are done well. Let's not forget that ME is a violent place and many a good elf idolized Aman as the land of milk and honey. That with a husband she cannot stand (even if it's by her own bitter/angry/whatever personality) and it can work like a charm.
Good to know you're writing again!!!
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Date: 2015-08-26 01:35 am (UTC)It's kind of a disaster. I have no idea what I'm doing. There have been tears.
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Date: 2015-08-25 10:31 pm (UTC)As for LaCE, I think a whole bunch of First Age elves never read the rule book. It's a bit like a very pious and devout Christian presenting a visiting alien with a copy of the 10 Commandments and saying 'These are our rules and we all obey them'. Yeah, right.
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Date: 2015-08-26 01:35 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 02:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 03:42 am (UTC)...Still waiting...
0_____0
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Date: 2015-08-26 04:41 am (UTC)Oh - they say it's meant to be fun!
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Date: 2015-08-26 04:48 am (UTC):D
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Date: 2015-08-26 12:32 am (UTC)Exactly. I never paid much attention to it at all. I didn't like it! I ignore things I dislike--like Elves never getting hungry or cold, crazy telescopic Elven eyesight, or Maedhros hanging from Thangorodhrim for 25 years (get out of here! I settled for two weeks in my story verse--that even seemed a little extreme).
On the splitting up couples question: I try to avoid it, but it is not a principled question for me. Before the couple has clear draw backs, and sailing West is part of canon. It does not seem like a cop-out to me. Killing them would seem more of a cop-out. But a good story is a good story. Whatever works for you and seems natural within the context of the world you are building ought to be workable. Vilification of one of my favorite female characters might not sit well with me, but, even then, I would never say never.
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Date: 2015-08-26 01:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 01:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 01:44 am (UTC)That's what happens when one jumps all over the broad strokes without stopping to think through the details. :(
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Date: 2015-08-26 03:15 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2015-08-26 08:09 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 03:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-08-26 09:23 am (UTC)In Middle-earth it was different. They could bind themselves to some-one for as long as they wanted (if they wanted children for instance) and then part when one or the other wanted to. (You couldn't hang on to some-one if they wanted to move on, as that was unfair - not saying it didn't happen, but there were deeply ingrained 'rules' against that, as it went against their kind of 'free love' attitude) They were far more sexually free. They also didn't go to the Halls of Mandos, but became Houseless and eventually 'ferthad' (spirit of place) like genius loci, so there was no 'waiting for your spouse to be reborn' etc.
I did have to write about Thranduil's wife, as it's obvious he had one but theirs was an arranged marriage too, just somewhat more important since Oropher and Thranduil and the people originally from Doriath were incomers into the Greenwood, and a lot hung on that. When she died (which I don't cover as it was before I started writing about it) she did follow the call of Mandos rather than refuse it. I'd have to read back to see why she made that decision, but it made sense to her. Thranduil, however, had fallen head over heels for some-one else not long before and felt incredibly guilty about it. Oropher had impressed on a young Thranduil how important his marriage was and Thranduil tied himself into knots and into being utterly faithful while wanting to live how the Elves of the Wood lived. It became a habit that he deeply resented underneath. He'd never been in love until Bainalph grew up and turned out to be everything he had wanted. Now his wife's returned, but not to Thranduil, more because the Greenwood is her home and she was born there, and because she's queen. So that 'resumed' marriage is more about politics than anything else.
So most of the arranged marriages (especially of the First Age and prior) just dissolved after a while, most of them even before the Noldor left, and I don't have to kill any-one off - except the people who were actually killed off in canon. Well, Fingon's wife was awful, though it wasn't her fault, and she's okay now, but she didn't die. He did.
When the Noldor return, they're free to be with who they wish - or at least approach them. Thranduil's people have never had that kind of lifestyle 'enforced' on them and thought it was weird. :)
I know whom I think is together and so they can be without having to marry for duty's sake.
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Date: 2015-08-26 04:00 pm (UTC)Part of my difficulty is trying to pack a digestible back-story into a one-off piece. I feel like I'd be able to develop it better if it were a longer story with a larger scope. But I had the idea for it before I had fleshed out the situation with her in my mind, and now I'm having to sort of retrofit it, which isn't ideal. At least, it's not my preferred option. I prefer to know these things going in, but it was more like, I've got this idea that I like, and this fully-explored relationship between these two people and... oh, shit. There's the Mystery Wife to deal with. 0___0
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Date: 2015-08-26 04:51 pm (UTC)I can see that as being perfectly realistic. I was in a relationship like that, not a marriage, but the same 'Maybe he'll fall in love with me' mind-set, and when it became clear that was not going to happen, I got out because it was better for me. Painful, but I was skating on melting ice, and it was pointless. I can quite see another woman doing the same thing.
I've got this idea that I like, and this fully-explored relationship between these two people and... oh, shit. There's the Mystery Wife to deal with. 0___0.
Lol. Yes, and they have to be dealt with because they're like the elephant in the room otherwise. :) I can go the 'Yes, they're all fine, they're just not around' route as they were as much a victim of circumstance as their erstwhile spouses. Thranduil is more of a problem unless his marriage was political. But he's so slashable :D
Anyhow, I like the idea of political marriages among Elves. They have kings and lords so they're obviously dynastic and could be bound by politics and duty as much as Men, and for those who love other men, what other options are there?
I look forward to reading the finished story!
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Date: 2015-08-28 02:06 am (UTC)Tbh, it really sours me on fic when the female character is demonized for the benefit of the slash pairing -- even if I happen to ship the pairing in question.
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Date: 2015-08-28 02:25 am (UTC)Tbh, it really sours me on fic when the female character is demonized for the benefit of the slash paring -- even if I happen to ship the pairing in question.
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Date: 2015-09-01 02:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-09-01 10:24 pm (UTC)I actually have (sort of) gone the cloister route with one of my other "inconvenient wives." That's such a horrible thing to call them! I really don't bash female characters, even if it sounds like I do!